Translation draft - 2

Translation 1
Choosing TV programs carefully is important. Although TV is the most crucial channel to supply information and entertainment, it may have some disadvantages. A few programs which are filled with violence and lust have bad influence on teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV does harm to our eyesight as well. Therefore, we are supposed to choose TV programs which are good for our body and mind. The most important thing is that do not be a couch potato.

Translation 2
Computers play an important role in our daily life. They can help students hand in their homework quickly, and also help people transmit information in time. Once you turn on a computer, you may fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself; do not sit in front of computers for too much time. Most of parents do not like their children to depend on computers. Especially, discussing on bulletin board systems wastes lots of time.

Translation draft - 1

Translation 1
Choosing the TV programs carefully is important. Although TV is the most crucial channel to supply information and entertainment, it may have some disadvantages. A few programs which are filled with violence and lust have bad influence for teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV does harm to our eyesight as well. Therefore, we are supposed to choose TV programs which are good for our body and mind. The most important is that do not be a couch potato.

Translation 2
Computers play an important role in our daily lives. They can help students hand in their homework quickly, and also help people transmit information in time. Once you turn on the computer, you must fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself; do not sit in front of the computers for a long time. Most of parents do not like their children to depend on the computers. Especially, it wastes much time discussing on bulletin board.

A punishment - draft 2

One day, when John went home from cram school, he felt very nervous because he saw a piece of papper on his father's hands. That was his report card of this exam. No wonder his father's face turned red with rage gradually. His father was surprised why John did not do well on his exam. Therefore John told the truth to his father. It was because he laughed at his teacher was as fat as an elephant. Then his teacher was so angry that she failed all John's subjects. After hearing the incident, John's father was so embarrassed about John's teacher. So he ordered his son that he must apologize to his teacher or John could not take the pocket money from his father. So he dicided to apologize to his teacher and became a hard-working student.

A punishment

One day, when John went home, he felt very nervous. Because he saw a piece of pepper on his father’s hands. That is his report card. No wonder his father’s face turned red with rage gradually. His father was surprised why he did not do well on his exam. Therefore John told the truth to his father. Just because he laughed at his teacher was as fat as an elephant. Then his teacher was so angry that she failed John’s all subjects. After heard the incident, John’s father was so embarrassed for John’s teacher. So he ordered his son that he must apologize to his teacher. John learned a lesson form the incident.

Tips for staying healthy - draft 2

Staying healthy is an important discussion for everyone. So we need to understand more tips to stay healthy. First, we have to gradually form the habit of getting up and going to bed early. Because having enough sleep is helpful for us to do everything what we want. Second, we had better take exercise twice or three times a week. It can let our blood circulation be more better. Third, we should choose more healthy food to eat instead of junk food, for example, vegetables, fruits, milk, and so on. Eating too much fat will let our bodies be sick or feel uncomfortable. Finally, also the most important tip that we are suppose to notice. That is to have a happy mood to face everything every day. Don’t put too much stress for our bodies or our lives will become bored. Staying healthy is not difficult. If we want to achieve it, staying healthy can become very easy.