A Dream I Had
Everyone has a dream at night certainly when they are sleeping. I ever had a dream about protecting the environment. In my dream, I appeared on the campus. Suddenly, I was surrounded by amounts of robots. I did not know why they were here, but they took action soon. Robots began to destroy things near the campus such as cars, motocycles, air-conditioners, and so on. I was so afraid that I cried out loudly. Then one of robots came to me and said,"Tell all human beings, you should stop to use them, or the earth would be ruined." After he stopped talking to me, I woke up. I consider that robots' action just warns us to protect our earth carefully.

9 Comments:
At 12:02 AM,
FawnYma said…
1.Everyone has a dream at night certainly when they are sleeping.
前面是單數後面則麼變複數?
2.you should stop "using" them
At 9:57 PM,
Samantha*霓∥ said…
you should stop to use them,>>stop using
I consider that robots' action just warns us to protect our earth carefully.>>這一句時態應該要跟前面一樣吧!
At 6:01 AM,
Ryuka(暐) said…
you should stop to use them
應該改成
you should stop "using" them
這兩個意思差很多啊!!
At 7:54 AM,
Butterfly said…
1.第一句很像廢話,難道有人會醒著做夢嗎,除了白日夢啦,就說每個人都有經驗就好了。
2.故事有一點太短了,文法是沒什麼大錯,反正就是梗再長一點就是了
At 8:05 AM,
Phoebe Lee said…
蝴蝶說的真狠,不過是事實
我好像越組了
At 3:45 AM,
許雅婷 said…
環保小尖兵耶
At 4:23 AM,
Celia said…
Tell all human beings, you should "stop to use them", or the earth would be ruined. 應該是stop using them
妳的夢好有意義,說不定妳以後會拯救世界!!
At 9:01 AM,
傻咩 said…
哪有人會夢這個的阿~
果然不夠環保的人要多做點環保的夢~”~
At 6:35 AM,
Tina said…
should stop "using" them
靜香果然就是靜香ㄟ...
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