Computers - draft 1
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. We use them to control the work of our washing machines, TV sets, DVD players, other electrical appliances, etc. Besides, computers are also used in business, transportation, education, researches and many other fields, for instance, webcan meeting, painting, calculation, and so on. To conclude, in this modern society, if we live without computers, this world would simply be unimaginable.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. First, I can communicate with many people who live around the world. Therefore, getting new information from different countries becomes more and more easy. Second, having leisure time, I enjoy entertainment in the Internet is one way to relax my mind and body such as playing on-line games, reading novels, chatting with my friends, and so on. Third, as I have to hand in my report of academic homework, the computer turns into a crucial tool. All in all, computers are the breath of the twentieth century.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. First, I can communicate with many people who live around the world. Therefore, getting new information from different countries becomes more and more easy. Second, having leisure time, I enjoy entertainment in the Internet is one way to relax my mind and body such as playing on-line games, reading novels, chatting with my friends, and so on. Third, as I have to hand in my report of academic homework, the computer turns into a crucial tool. All in all, computers are the breath of the twentieth century.

6 Comments:
At 8:30 PM,
FawnYma said…
1. having leisure time, I enjoy entertainment in the Internet "is one way to relax my mind and body such as playing on-line games, reading novels, chatting with my friends, and so on."
我覺得這段好奇怪,為什麼後面還有is 那句
妳還是把它改成兩句比較好
At 10:12 PM,
Ryuka(暐) said…
having leisure time, I enjoy entertainment in the Internet is one way to relax my mind and body such as playing on-line games, reading novels, chatting with my friends, and so on.
such as的前面應該要加,吧
At 6:29 AM,
Butterfly said…
1.Therefore, getting new information from different countries becomes more and more easy後面可以直接用easier就好了
At 6:26 AM,
Samantha*霓∥ said…
for instance, webcan meeting>>webcam
At 5:30 AM,
Tina said…
having leisure time, I enjoy entertainment in the Internet is one way to relax my mind and body such as playing on-line games, reading novels, chatting with my friends, and so on.
好長ㄉ一段話ㄚ....
應該可以拆成兩句吧!
At 8:44 PM,
傻咩 said…
webcan多了一個b
getting new information(s)
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