A punishment
One day, when John went home, he felt very nervous. Because he saw a piece of pepper on his father’s hands. That is his report card. No wonder his father’s face turned red with rage gradually. His father was surprised why he did not do well on his exam. Therefore John told the truth to his father. Just because he laughed at his teacher was as fat as an elephant. Then his teacher was so angry that she failed John’s all subjects. After heard the incident, John’s father was so embarrassed for John’s teacher. So he ordered his son that he must apologize to his teacher. John learned a lesson form the incident.

10 Comments:
At 4:44 AM,
Sally Sun said…
One day, when John went home, he felt very nervous. Because he saw a piece of pepper on his father’s hands.這裡because 不能大寫要小寫
Just because he laughed at his teacher was as fat as an elephant沒主詞
It is just because..我不太確定...擬自己確認一下
After heard 若要省略主詞就要用hearing
embarrassed for我覺得介詞好像不是for我忘了你自己查依下
At 2:57 AM,
Samantha*霓∥ said…
pepper>>paper
你的跟我的好像...(畫圈圈)
At 8:31 AM,
Estella said…
That is his report card.
改成that was or it was 恩
時態時態~~~
At 7:34 PM,
FawnYma said…
1.That "was" his report card
2. "It was" because he laughed at his teacher as fat as an elephant.
3. she failed "all" John’s subjects.
4.After hearing the incident
At 7:43 PM,
許雅婷 said…
1. a piece of pepper 打錯了
2.After heard the incident應該是hearing
At 7:45 PM,
Ryuka(暐) said…
pepper應該是papper喔
你的跟甄霓的還滿像的說XD
At 7:47 PM,
Vivian said…
看來你們還不錯有默契的嘛~~~
At 7:49 PM,
Butterfly said…
1.That is his report card用過去式
2.Just because he laughed at his teacher was as fat as an elephant我覺得不用just
3.After heard the incident我覺得hearing
4.After heard the incident, John’s father was so embarrassed for John’s teacher. 應該是embarrassed about John's teacher
5.John learned a lesson form the incident.加個finally之類的的
At 8:13 PM,
傻咩 said…
應該是paper吧= =""
That "is" his report card用was
At 8:33 PM,
Tina said…
That "was" his report card.
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