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Sunday, December 30, 2007

Why Is English Important ? - draft 1

English has become a global language recently. First, if you want to look for a job whose salary is better than others, you must be good at English, including listening, speaking, reading or writing. There are more and more jobs which are relative with English, if you do not have skills about English, you will lose the chance to get the job. Second, when you travel abroad by yourself, but you can not speak the native language, you are able to speak English because English is a language in common use. Each country must have a least one person who can speak English. Finally, continuing improving you English is the most important. If you want to make process of English, you need to practice it every day. English is very important for all of us.

5 Comments:

  • At 7:39 PM, Blogger Butterfly said…

    1.when you travel abroad by yourself, but you can not speak the native language,如果用but的話我覺得有兩個連接詞,你可以結束上一句用however開始

    2.我覺得全部你用的if太多了,可以找一些詞代換

     
  • At 1:42 AM, Blogger FawnYma said…

    1.including listening, speaking, reading "and" writing
    2.are relative "to" English
    3.but you can not speak the native language "." "You" are able to speak English because English is a language in common use.
    4."at" least
    5."continually" improving "your"
    6. make process "in" 我印象中好像用in…

     
  • At 5:19 AM, Blogger Samantha*霓∥ said…

    continuing improving you English is the most important.>>your

     
  • At 6:15 PM, Blogger Celia said…

    including listening, speaking, reading "or" writing. 改用"and"應該會比較好。

     
  • At 8:03 AM, Blogger 許雅婷 said…

    relative 要加to

     

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