Making decisions - draft 1
Growing up means making my own decisions. In other words, I should consider everything carefully in order to decide my own affairs. When a person is eighteen years old in Taiwan, he or she is supposed to be responsible for the things what he or she does. Therefore, if you do something illegal, the law has the right to catch you. Then, making good decisions becomes an essential lesson for everyone.
The hardest decision that I ever make was which academic field I am interested in. Actually, I major in department of applied foreign languages. But I decide choosing another field that is business. However, my opinion is that there are many chances to enter a nice national collage and I can find a good job more easily. The decision which I have to take responsibility was made by me. I trust that I can make my own decision become my bright future.
The hardest decision that I ever make was which academic field I am interested in. Actually, I major in department of applied foreign languages. But I decide choosing another field that is business. However, my opinion is that there are many chances to enter a nice national collage and I can find a good job more easily. The decision which I have to take responsibility was made by me. I trust that I can make my own decision become my bright future.

8 Comments:
At 6:06 AM,
Celia said…
he or she is supposed to be responsible for the things "what" he or she does.
應該用"that"吧?
"Then", making good decisions becomes ....
用then好像不是很順,用"thus"會不會比較好?
At 6:41 AM,
FawnYma said…
1.I should consider everything carefully "before I" decide my own affairs.
2.The hardest decision that I ever make was which academic field "I am interested in." 我覺得用 to major in 比較順
3.I decide choosing another field "that is business." 感覺用called business較好,感覺啦!
4.The decision which I have to take responsibility was made by me.
有點怪…
At 7:51 AM,
Samantha*霓∥ said…
But I decide choosing another..>>but不適合用再句首
However, my opinion is that there are many chances to enter>>這句用However怪怪的
At 5:38 AM,
Butterfly said…
1.第一段一直用he or she有點冗長,用they就好了,而且我覺得第一段的主詞有點飄,一下子I,一下子he or she,一下子you,而且不知道能不能這樣用啦,法律來抓你,我知道這是擬人法啦,不過保險一點可以用被動
2.But I decide choosing another field that is business. 我記得decide後面一定要加to
3.to enter a nice national collage and I can find a good job more easily. 那個大學拼錯你知道吧
At 5:25 AM,
Ryuka(暐) said…
.to enter a nice national collage and I can find a good job more easily.
不是collage(這是拼貼)是college
At 6:07 AM,
許雅婷 said…
1.I decide choosing another field 應該decide後要加to
2.national collage 拼錯字
At 7:40 AM,
傻咩 said…
你第一段前後主詞不一樣,一開始是he or she後面就變成you了…
national "collage" 打錯了喔
你選這條路一定沒錯的!!相信我~~哈哈
At 8:07 PM,
Tina said…
decide
及物V.[+wh-][+to-v][+(that)]
不及物V.[(+on/for/against)]
national "college"
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