My bedroom - draft 2

My bedroom

My bedroom is a place which can make my sister and I relax. My bedroom is small. There is a desk of my sister on the left and next to the door. A bookcase which keeps my novels, comic books, text books, and the presents from my friends is on the left corner. And on the right corner is a big closet. My desk which accompanys me for many years is between a bookcase and a closet. On the right wall, there is a rectangular window which I can see my mother cooking dinner for my family. My bunk bed that I sleep with my sister every night is under the window on the right corner next to the other closet near the door. Although my bedroom is not luxurious and big, it can let my sister and I feel warm and comfortable.

Learning English - draft 2

Learning English

Learning English can be helpful and general, but it may be hard. On the one hand, we can communicate with foreigners, travel around the world by ourselves, and know many countries' cultures; on the other hand, learning English can be hard. For example, if you want to study more about English, you need to increase the knowledge of English. For instance, read magazines, newspapers, and listen to English programs. But some grammars are difficult to be understood or you have to memorize more and more new words and phrases in mind as possible as you can. Then, if you feel like finding a job which the treatment is nice, you should learn English more and more hard. Nowadays, many people regard English as their second language. So if you long for winning other people, you must be good at English. Let English become your daily life.

Learning English-draft1

Learning English-draft 1

Learning English can be helpful and general, but it may be hard. On the one hand, we can communicate with foreigners, travel around the world by ourselves, and know many countries' cultures; on the other hand, learning English can be hard. For example, if you want to study more about English, you need to increase the knowledge of English. For instance, read magazines, newspapers, and listen to English programs.But, some grammers are difficult to be understood or you have to memorize more and more new words and phrases in mind as possible as you can. Then, if you feel like finding a job which the treatment is nice, you should learn English more and more hard. Nowadays, many people regard English as their second language. So if you long for winning other people, you must be good at English. Let English become your daily life.

My bedroom-draft1

My bedroom-draft 1

My bedroom is a place which can make my sister and I relax. My bedroom is small. There is a desk of my sister on the left. A bookcase which keeps my novels, comic books, text books, and presents from my friends is on the left corner. And on the right corner is a big closet. My desk which companys with me for many years is between a bookcase and a closet. On the right wall, there is a rectangular window which I can see my mother cooking dinner for my family. My bunk bed is under the window on the right corner next to the other closet near the door. Although my bedroom is not luxurious and big, it can let my sister and I feel warm.

An Embarrasing Experience-draft2

An Embarrasing Experience -draft 2

When I was nine, I had an embarrasing experience. One day, I went to my grandma's home with my family. When we arrived there, there was nobody at home. At the same time, we did not see my grandma. I thought my grandma should be at my aunt's home. Therefore , we decided to look for my grandma. When my mother and I walked on the street, I saw a woman who looked like my grandma. Then, I shouted loudly and said, "Grandma! Grandma! It's me." But, for a while, the woman did not turn back. When I felt strange that there was something wrong, my mom told me that the woman was not my grandma, she was just a stranger . Oh my God! I made a big and embarrasing mistake. What is going on with me ? Thus, I learn a lesson from the incident. If you are not sure about something, do not make a decision quickly, or you will get a embarrassing experience again.