Translation draft - 1
Translation 1
Choosing the TV programs carefully is important. Although TV is the most crucial channel to supply information and entertainment, it may have some disadvantages. A few programs which are filled with violence and lust have bad influence for teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV does harm to our eyesight as well. Therefore, we are supposed to choose TV programs which are good for our body and mind. The most important is that do not be a couch potato.
Translation 2
Computers play an important role in our daily lives. They can help students hand in their homework quickly, and also help people transmit information in time. Once you turn on the computer, you must fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself; do not sit in front of the computers for a long time. Most of parents do not like their children to depend on the computers. Especially, it wastes much time discussing on bulletin board.
Choosing the TV programs carefully is important. Although TV is the most crucial channel to supply information and entertainment, it may have some disadvantages. A few programs which are filled with violence and lust have bad influence for teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV does harm to our eyesight as well. Therefore, we are supposed to choose TV programs which are good for our body and mind. The most important is that do not be a couch potato.
Translation 2
Computers play an important role in our daily lives. They can help students hand in their homework quickly, and also help people transmit information in time. Once you turn on the computer, you must fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself; do not sit in front of the computers for a long time. Most of parents do not like their children to depend on the computers. Especially, it wastes much time discussing on bulletin board.
posted by 梁宜靜 @ 8:21 PM
8 Comments:
At 2:49 AM,
FawnYma said…
1.Once you turn on the computer, you "must" fall in love with it.
我覺得must太強烈了，妳可以用will替代
2."it" wastes much time discussing on bulletin board. 妳前面打computers
所以用they比較好
At 5:30 AM,
Butterfly said…
1. A few programs which are filled with violence and lust have bad influence for teenagers.那個lust後可以幅that it have bad .....
2.in our daily lives應該是life
3. However, be sure to remind yourself; do not sit in front of the computers for a long time.後不用用分號，那個是有副詞用的。要不然用that連接
At 5:30 AM,
Butterfly said…
1. A few programs which are filled with violence and lust have bad influence for teenagers.那個lust後可以幅that it have bad .....
2.in our daily lives應該是life
3. However, be sure to remind yourself; do not sit in front of the computers for a long time.後不用用分號，那個是有副詞用的。要不然用that連接
At 6:31 AM,
許雅婷 said…
1.Choosing the TV programs 多個the
2.the computers用單數喔
At 5:05 AM,
Samantha＊霓∥ said…
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At 5:31 AM,
Samantha＊霓∥ said…
1.
may可以用might語氣比較緩和
2.it wastes much
wastes>>前面是複數這裡是不是不要加es比較連貫
5:05 AM
At 7:42 PM,
傻咩 said…
bad influence "for" teenagers聽說要用on唷～（reading teacher…）
At 8:25 PM,
Tina said…
Choosing "the" TV programs好像是多餘滴
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