autobiography-draft1 (part1)
My name is Liang Yi – Ching(梁宜靜), a seventeen-year-old outgoing girl. I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I have an English name called Karen. There are four people in my family. My father who works hard is a down-to-earth employment. He always tells me many discourses about principle of human. When I have difficulty learning, he will tell me to look the bright side and give me constructive suggestion. My mother is a diligent housewife and usually keeps our house clean. She gives me flexible space to do what I like. Therefore, I can make a decision by myself. I have an elder sister. She is a college student and majors in preschool education. I love the warm and comfortable family. It always makes me be filled with a sense of security.
I’m an easygoing and generous person. I feel that I am not confident about everything such as my studies or my behavior. My professional is oral reading and oration. Therefore, I participate in a contest which selects two or three emcees of school. Luckily, I was chosen to be one of the emcees at school. I hope I can do my best and have a good performance. On weekends, I like to go to book stores to do outside reading with various books, however, I can improve my extra-curricular knowledge. Besides, I like listening to music . Sometimes, I stay up late to prepare for tests. Then I will turn on the radio to listen to music programs in order that I can release my pressure .That is a good way.
I’m an easygoing and generous person. I feel that I am not confident about everything such as my studies or my behavior. My professional is oral reading and oration. Therefore, I participate in a contest which selects two or three emcees of school. Luckily, I was chosen to be one of the emcees at school. I hope I can do my best and have a good performance. On weekends, I like to go to book stores to do outside reading with various books, however, I can improve my extra-curricular knowledge. Besides, I like listening to music . Sometimes, I stay up late to prepare for tests. Then I will turn on the radio to listen to music programs in order that I can release my pressure .That is a good way.

8 Comments:
At 11:45 PM,
FawnYma said…
1.to look "on" the bright side
2.give me constructive "suggestions"
3. I can make "decisions" by myself
4.It always makes me "be" filled with a sense of security.
be要刪掉
At 7:38 AM,
許雅婷 said…
1.When I have difficulty learning應該是a difficult
2.look the bright side 是look on the bright side
At 9:42 PM,
Celia said…
"When I have difficulty learning, he will tell me to look the bright side and give me constructive suggestion."suggestion應該要是複數。
At 5:55 AM,
Samantha*霓∥ said…
look the bright side>>look on
My mother is a diligent housewife>>diligent好像後面要+in耶,應該可以改成My mother is diligent in housework
At 6:54 PM,
Ryuka(暐) said…
look the bright side
應該是look "on" the bright side
At 4:38 AM,
Butterfly said…
1.My name is Liang Yi – Ching(梁宜靜)那個姓要放後面,而且後面可以不用逗點,要不然寫My name is Yi-Ching Liang,and I'm a......
2.he will tell me to look the bright side and give me constructive suggestion.那個and 前面要加逗點,而且既然是一個新的句那個最好用giving
3.I like to go to book stores to do outside reading with various books, however, I can improve my extra-curricular knowledge那個書店兩個字不用分開吧,而且however前面用分號,而且我覺得用so that比較順
At 5:51 AM,
傻咩 said…
to look the bright side 加個on
give me constructive suggestion"s".
At 6:09 AM,
Tina said…
look "on" the bright side
constructive "suggestions"
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