Tips for Staying Healthy - draft 1
Staying healthy is an important discussion for everyone. So we need to understand more tips to stay healthy. First, we have to get up and go to bed early. Because having enough sleep is helpful for us to do everything what you want. Second, taking exercise twice or three times a week. It can let our blood circulation more better. Third, we should choose more healthy food to eat as soon as possible, for example, vegetables, fruits, milk, and so on. Eating too much fat can let our bodies be sick or feel uncomfortable. Finally, it is also the most important tip that we should notice. That is to have a happy mood to face everything every day. Do not put too much stress for our bodies or our lives will become bored. Staying healthy is not difficult. If you want to achieve it, staying healthy can be very easy.

6 Comments:
At 9:22 PM,
FawnYma said…
1.Because having enough sleep is helpful for us to do everything what "we" want.
2.we should choose more healthy food to eat "as possible as we can"
就醬吧!~
At 1:24 AM,
Tina said…
what you want=>what we want.
Do not=>是不是要變成Don't呢?
At 7:26 PM,
傻咩 said…
what you want->what we want
If you want to achieve it->If we..
At 7:51 PM,
Samantha*霓∥ said…
It can let our blood circulation more better.
我覺得要在後面加"be" more better
At 5:45 AM,
Butterfly said…
1. It can let our blood circulation more better.應該是much better
2.Third, we should choose more healthy food to eat as soon as possible我了你的點是說要人年輕就要吃健康的食物之類的,但我覺得好像那邊有健康的食物要趕快全部吃完的感覺,本人覺得Third, we should choose more healthy food to eat when we are young誤會你的意思再說啦
At 5:46 AM,
許雅婷 said…
Because having enough sleep is helpful for us to do everything what you want.應該是what we want
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