An Embarrasing Experience-draft1
An Embarrasing Experience -draft 1
When I was young, I had a embarrasing experience. One day, I went to grandma's home with my family. When we arrived at the house, we couldn't find my grandma. I thought my grandma must go to my aunt's home. So we decided to find my grandma. When mother and I walked on the street, I saw a women who looked like my grandma. Then, I shouted loudly and said, "Grandma! Grandma! It's me." But, for a while , the women did not turn back. When I felt strange, my mom told me that the women was not my grandma, she just was a stranger. Oh my God! I made a big and embarrasing mistake. What is going on with me ? Thus, I learn a lesson from the incident. If you are not sure for something, you do not make a decisssion quickly, right?
When I was young, I had a embarrasing experience. One day, I went to grandma's home with my family. When we arrived at the house, we couldn't find my grandma. I thought my grandma must go to my aunt's home. So we decided to find my grandma. When mother and I walked on the street, I saw a women who looked like my grandma. Then, I shouted loudly and said, "Grandma! Grandma! It's me." But, for a while , the women did not turn back. When I felt strange, my mom told me that the women was not my grandma, she just was a stranger. Oh my God! I made a big and embarrasing mistake. What is going on with me ? Thus, I learn a lesson from the incident. If you are not sure for something, you do not make a decisssion quickly, right?
posted by 梁宜靜 @ 6:55 AM
8 Comments:
At 4:32 AM,
FawnYma said…
還好她沒轉頭，不然妳就丟臉丟到家了，不過妳也可以馬上叫妳媽"阿嬤"，這樣她就不會想說妳在叫她了。(雖然妳媽很犧牲…)
那個、she was just a stranger 比較順，就醬，大頭香。
At 12:52 AM,
許雅婷 said…
我有好多次這樣的經驗,真的好丟臉喔,所以一定要記取教訓
At 5:35 AM,
Samantha＊霓∥ said…
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At 5:55 AM,
Samantha＊霓∥ said…
the women<< did not turn back.
是woman?
So we decided to find my grandma.
用Therefor好像比較好XD
At 6:02 AM,
Tina said…
文章裡的women=>woman
decission=>正確的decision(最後一行)
arrived at the house
我覺得改成arrived there比較好ㄟ.....
At 7:35 AM,
傻咩 said…
a women?應該是a woman吧@@?
靜香也來加入傻咩一族八~^^~
At 7:44 PM,
Butterfly said…
When I was young, I had a embarrasing experience. One day, I went to 加個my吧grandma's home with my family. When we arrived at the house, we couldn't find my grandma. I thought my grandma must 怪怪的go to my aunt's home. So we decided to find my grandma. When 所有格 mother and I walked on the street, I saw a women who looked like my grandma. Then, I shouted loudly and said, "Grandma! Grandma! It's me." But, for a while 本人想after a little time 之類的, the women did not turn back. When I felt strange 本人想 somethnig wrong, my mom told me that the women was not my grandma, she just was a stranger. Oh my God! I made a big and embarrasing mistake. What is going on with me ? Thus, I learn a lesson from the incident. If you are not sure for something, you do not make a decisssion quickly, right?
世紀正妹許蝴蝶到此一遊
At 8:00 PM,
Celia said…
我也覺得"She was just a stranger"會比"She just was a stranger"念起來更順噢....
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